IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample - Academic - Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled

Topic:
Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being benefical, this is a danger to our societies.

What are your views?

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In last few years, the morden technology has been developed very fast. People getting used to use
the rapid and uncontrolled technology instead of (some people believe that) manpower. On the
other hand, it brings problems to our societies. I will consider these different points of views in
favour to support the modern technology.

It has been argued that too much morden technology cause people losing their job. Nowadays,
many factories are useing automatic technology instead manpower, in order to increase their
business. However, It brings a huge problem of unemployment, furthermore, it would increasing on
the crimes rate. Similiy, morden technology speeds up our life. people feel stressful about their jobs,
families, and societies.

It is no doubt that morden technology deveoloped our life more convenient than before. For
example, we could keeping in touch with our friends which live far away from us pass through the
internet. Moreover, companies could contact with their customer by the internet. It’s much cheaper
than calling the long-distance phone. Besides, the technology development could help medicine
inventing.


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